Score: 8

"Cool."

submission: White Mask

date: July 16, 2006

You take some influence from Vinnie Veritas, right? I love his stuff, and with some practice, I think you could make his style your own. Keep it up, man.

Score: 9

"Nice!"

submission: TIEL 35 - Plywood Menace

date: May 16, 2006

In answer to the lag problem, try making the audio "streaming".
To do this, click a frame with audio.
Look in the properties panel at the bottom.
Change "sync" to "Stream".
This lowers the quality, but makes sure the animation is always in-sync with the audio.

Nice anim, dude.
Keep it up.

Score: 8

"This is gonna be cool!"

submission: Illusions Trailer

date: April 29, 2006

Looks like a good idea.
There's a couple of things you should change for the real thing, though.
I don't think you're streaming the audio.
This makes it hard to keep things in sync (lip-sync, music loops) etc.

Also, sorry to complain, but the credits should roll from bottom to top ;)

I do hope you understand this isn't me just griping, but I really want you to do well.

I look forward to your next submission.

Score: 10

"This series is the best stuff on Newgrounds"

submission: Freak: Episode 2

date: April 22, 2006

It may not be may all-time favourite flash(es) on NG, but it's the best series by far!!

Thank you for bringing it to the net.
And please continue.

Score: 10

"SOAD Rock!"

submission: banana terracotta pie

date: January 17, 2006

And it is "Vicinity Of Obscenity" by the way.

Score: 10

"Link no worky-dattebayo"

submission: -=His pride=-

date: January 3, 2006

Link doesn't work!
But judging by your other stuff, I'm sure it's great ;)

But please fix ASAP ;)

Score: 6

"Difficulty"

submission: Virtual Police (Stage 1)

date: December 31, 2005

It IS a problem... easy should be easier than that, and hard should be harder than that!

Good game, though ;)

Score: 6

"It's OK..."

submission: spider kid movie trailer

date: December 24, 2005

I would definitely say make some more, but your techniques just need a bit of refinement.

For instance...
The shading on spidey shouldn't cover up the black outline.
To do this, make another layer, and draw the line for the separation between shade and normal. Then copy the outline on top of the line.
This means that when you fill in the colour, it won't interfere with the main outline.

This should improve the overall quality of the movie.

Well Done, and keep at it ;)

Score: 10

"What the hell was that?!?!?!"

submission: super kid force

date: December 12, 2005

Look man... you're a great artist and animator... But how could you do that to your loving fans?! Please finish it off as a series!!!

Score: 10

"Wow"

submission: Falcon Love: The Movie

date: November 29, 2005

Your just so good... The music, the singing, the flash... You guys are just really, really cool! ;)

Please do more!